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这是千年战争史啊!意境不合
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三平尾
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终究对仗勉强
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第一句可以。
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前分句好,后分句可酌
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双山倒蘸一川水,半指横穿两片天。
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东去奔流,动词重复,对联忌讳
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勉强
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耕霞种月皆得趣把酒品茗自忘机——兰心惠赠
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思路别致
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