【2009.4.5止】“和谐税务杯”初评结果公示

邢伟川

<DIV class=quote><B>以下是引用<I>冷不防</I>在2009-3-31 14:43:58的发言：</B>


<P>谢谢教诲！

<P>在讨论问题时得罪您啦。还望今后不吝赐教！</P></DIV>
<P>只要是心平气和的讨论问题，谈不上得罪的。</P>

正龙挺虎

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正龙挺虎

<P><FONT color=#f73809>最后陈述</FONT></P><P>入围有三：</P><P>九州铺锦；
两税撑天。</P><P>心系强国志；
情牵纳税人。</P><P>千行连国脉；
两税奠邦基。</P><P>候补之二：
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民生万卷；
税字千钧。</P><P>10
三门铺锦绣；
两税铸辉煌。</P><P>
写句字，是为了被认可，尤其是写短句字，被认可的概率是很低的，所以，首先以真诚之心敬佩及恭贺上面几作者（包括额）之勇气和运气
要想被人认可，就得有推敲之精神，字字推敲，当然水平分高低那也是没有办法的，但只要是用了心到了位的，也没什么遗憾的了，
首先肯定应该是立了个意，和谐之税，然后就是怎么个角度望远了，，，</P><P>九州铺锦；
两税撑天。</P><P>此联句角度是平仰视，写了祖国的大好河山，繁荣富强，天地间凝聚了税之精神，一点点想法是两税2字局限了，改成一税，是不是要意境上变化了些，2税并1税已经有声音很长时间了，但此一税非彼一税。</P><P>心系强国志；
情牵纳税人。</P><P>此联句角度是内探视，写了税务工作者门的情怀品质。但系字有疑问。
</P><P>千行连国脉；
两税奠邦基。
此联句角度是圆圈视，写了税务工作的重要性，就是一个中心点画了个脉圆。千字略为凑了些。
</P><P>三门铺锦绣；
两税铸辉煌。
此联句角度是聚光视，焦点在三门，所聚之光非常耀眼。
</P><P>民生万卷；
税字千钧。
此联句角度是透心视，借于老师之点评，摆显一下哈，哈</P><P>“国计”养活“民生”，方方面面何止“万卷”；要想过得好，财政再倾斜，离不开和谐税收。
8个字，象喻立体，乃下字精确；深刻地表达了“取之于民，还之于民”的税收宗旨，巧妙地涵盖了本次“和谐税收”的征集主题。一个“税字//民生”，一个“千钧//万卷”，对于该征的与该免的，国家一言，该经过多少科学的论证。千头万绪的民生，一言九鼎的税政，已然是情感之上的“科学”、理解之下的和谐。</P>[em12]

山妹

<DIV class=quote><B>以下是引用<I>戴绍湘</I>在2009-3-31 20:02:15的发言：</B>

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<P>
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<P>
<P>
<P mso-pagination: 17pt; 18pt; TEXT-INDENT: 0pt; 0cm WORD-BREAK: 732.8pt? 687.0pt 641.2pt 595.4pt 549.6pt 503.8pt 458.0pt 412.2pt 366.4pt 320.6pt 274.8pt 229.0pt 183.2pt 137.4pt 91.6pt 45.8pt tab-stops: widow-orphan; LINE-HEIGHT: break-all;>和谐千里共，遵章守法，我是光荣纳税人。</P>
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<P><FONT color=#ee11ee size=3>广西玉林市“税务杯”诗联比赛评奖揭晓（2006年）</FONT></P>
<P>有口皆碑，君真廉洁聚财者；
<P>问心无愧，我是光荣纳税人。作者：周广征（安徽省铜陵市）</P></DIV>
<P>戴老师慧眼！！</P>

展之

<P>这次几幅短联进入等级奖，让人耳目一新，值得推广，值得赞扬。</P><P>这几幅联确实好，主题突出，清新明快。欣赏和学习中！</P>

大河风

<DIV class=quote><B>以下是引用<I>联林小草</I>在2009-3-31 9:05:47的发言：</B>


方老师5点多在网，是不睡觉还是早起？[em07][em07][em07][em07]</DIV>

<FONT size=5>哈哈！谢谢联林老师的关心，当然是早上了，因为白天有公务在身。</FONT>

准联学会

<P>本次多联有抄袭情况，有的几乎照搬，有的是局部，看来界定抄袭多少算抄袭是值得商榷的问题。</P><P>庸人自扰。</P>

穿云燕子

<P>信手从中国楹联报上摘来两联：</P>
<P>1、2007.7.20常熟县衙联</P>
<P>五日风，<U><FONT face=黑体 size=6>十日雨</FONT></U>，岁乃常熟</P>
<P>九年耕，三年蓄，民其来苏</P>
<P>十日雨，三仄。（其他语句的平仄未作祥考）</P>
<P>2、2007.3.9</P>
<P>何香凝挽丈夫廖仲恺先生联</P>
<P><U><FONT size=7>夫妻恩</FONT></U>，今世未全来世再</P>
<P>儿女情，两人共负一人完</P>
<P>夫妻恩，三平</P>
<P>3、2008.8.8中国楹联报载马萧萧老师联</P>
<P>且望三巴烟雨，三湘烟波，三楚烟树，三吴烟花排比自对联</P>
<P>平仄还望诸君学习。时间关系，不多列举。</P>
<P><FONT size=6>看到上面的最后陈述，有些技痒，东施效颦一回：我是这样认为的，《联律通则》并未硬性规定“二字一节”，按语流节奏或语意节奏，完全可以“一字一节”、“三字一节”，甚至“多字一节”，在多句联中，三字或三字一下的分句，因其简短，句中无明显的节奏点时，可不考虑平仄转换，这与《联律通则》要求是一致的。一家之言，一孔之见！</FONT></P>
<P><FONT size=6>莫让联律缚你我，祝君获奖乐呵呵。</FONT></P>

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石桥

<DIV class=quote><B>以下是引用<I>正龙挺虎</I>在2009-3-31 14:10:47的发言：</B>

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<P>
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聚宝盆、摇钱树的提法太过陈旧，且有迷信色彩。挂到国家机关门前不知会不会让人倒胃口。

韦编三绝

<DIV class=quote><B>以下是引用<I>石桥</I>在2009-4-1 9:02:13的发言：</B>


聚宝盆、摇钱树的提法太过陈旧，且有迷信色彩。挂到国家机关门前不知会不会让人倒胃口。</DIV>
<P>石桥老师所言极是，这两个词用的太滥了！！</P>

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山妹

<P break-all; LINE-HEIGHT: 12pt"><FONT face=宋体>总结下已发现的抄袭或套用：</FONT></P><P break-all; LINE-HEIGHT: 12pt"><FONT face=宋体>诚<FONT color=#f70909>待投资客，笑迎纳税人</FONT>，无边活水三门聚； <p></p></FONT></P><P break-all; LINE-HEIGHT: 12pt" mso-pagination: 17pt; 18pt; TEXT-INDENT: 0pt; 0cm WORD-BREAK: LINE-HEIGHT: break-all; widow-orphan?><FONT face=宋体>身如<FONT color=#113dee>雪岭莲</FONT>，心比香山叶，满峡清风两袖来。 <p></p></FONT></P><P break-all; LINE-HEIGHT: 12pt"><FONT face=宋体><FONT color=#ee1111>杰构涌名城，看长桥广道，巨厦高楼，端赖税收挥大笔； <p></p></FONT></FONT></P><P break-all; LINE-HEIGHT: 12pt" mso-pagination: 17pt; 18pt; TEXT-INDENT: 0pt; 0cm WORD-BREAK: 732.8pt? 687.0pt 641.2pt 595.4pt 549.6pt 503.8pt 458.0pt 412.2pt 366.4pt 320.6pt 274.8pt 229.0pt 183.2pt 137.4pt 91.6pt 45.8pt tab-stops: widow-orphan; LINE-HEIGHT: break-all;><FONT face=宋体><FONT color=#ee1111>清风赢美誉，喜<FONT color=#000000>善政新规</FONT>，雄心壮志，全凭正气树丰碑。<p></p></FONT></FONT></P><P break-all; LINE-HEIGHT: 12pt"><FONT face=宋体>扶助以情，征收以法，情法相融，<FONT color=#f70909>聚宝盆</FONT>中金玉满； <p></p></FONT></P><P break-all; LINE-HEIGHT: 12pt" mso-pagination: 17pt; 18pt; TEXT-INDENT: 0pt; 0cm WORD-BREAK: 732.8pt? 687.0pt 641.2pt 595.4pt 549.6pt 503.8pt 458.0pt 412.2pt 366.4pt 320.6pt 274.8pt 229.0pt 183.2pt 137.4pt 91.6pt 45.8pt tab-stops: widow-orphan; LINE-HEIGHT: break-all;><FONT face=宋体>经营凭信，缴纳凭诚，信诚并重，<FONT color=#f70909>摇钱树</FONT>上果实丰。<p></p></FONT></P><P break-all; LINE-HEIGHT: 12pt"><FONT face=宋体>风雨一肩挑，凿石引流，<FONT color=#e6421a>君为财富拓源者； <p></p></FONT></FONT></P><P break-all; LINE-HEIGHT: 12pt" mso-pagination: 17pt; 18pt; TEXT-INDENT: 0pt; 0cm WORD-BREAK: 732.8pt? 687.0pt 641.2pt 595.4pt 549.6pt 503.8pt 458.0pt 412.2pt 366.4pt 320.6pt 274.8pt 229.0pt 183.2pt 137.4pt 91.6pt 45.8pt tab-stops: widow-orphan; LINE-HEIGHT: break-all;><FONT face=宋体>和谐千里共，遵章守法，<FONT color=#dd2222>我是光荣纳税人。<p></p></FONT></FONT></P><P break-all; LINE-HEIGHT: 12pt"><FONT face=宋体>依法征收，<FONT color=#f70909>千秋国脉千秋福；<p></p></FONT></FONT></P><P break-all; LINE-HEIGHT: 12pt" mso-pagination: 17pt; 0pt; 0cm LINE-HEIGHT: widow-orphan? TEXT-ALIGN: left;><FONT face=宋体>照章缴纳，<FONT color=#e6421a>一份税金一份情。<p></p></FONT></FONT></P><P 0cm 0cm 0pt"><p><FONT face="Times New Roman"> </FONT></p></P>

孟广祥

<P>同意穿云燕子老师关于“句中或句首三言联（意思是三字分句只要不是在末尾）”可三平或三仄的观点。不过话说回来，“可”并非“最好”。</P><P>不赞成穿云燕子老师信手从《中国楹联报》上摘联作依据的做法，因这样总不如以《联律通则》（修订稿）作依据更有说服力。更何况所摘之联还有毛病，如用“九年耕，三年蓄”对“五日风，十日雨”，明显违背了“通则”中关于“上下联对应节奏点上的用字平仄相反”的规定。</P><P>说的不对之处，请指正。</P>

山妹

<DIV class=quote><B>以下是引用<I>孟广祥</I>在2009-4-1 9:27:25的发言：</B>

<P>同意穿云燕子老师关于“句中或句首三言联（意思是三字分句只要不是在末尾）”可三平或三仄的观点。不过话说回来，“可”并非“最好”。</P>
<P>不赞成穿云燕子老师信手从《中国楹联报》上摘联作依据的做法，因这样总不如以《联律通则》（修订稿）作依据更有说服力。更何况所摘之联还有毛病，如用“九年耕，三年蓄”对“五日风，十日雨”，明显违背了“通则”中关于“上下联对应节奏点上的用字平仄相反”的规定。</P>
<P>说的不对之处，请指正。</P></DIV>

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正龙挺虎

<DIV class=quote><B>以下是引用<I>山妹</I>在2009-4-1 9:22:08的发言：</B>

<P LINE-HEIGHT: break-all; 12pt?><FONT face=宋体>总结下已发现的抄袭或套用：</FONT></P>
<P LINE-HEIGHT: break-all; 12pt?><FONT face=宋体>诚<FONT color=#f70909>待投资客，笑迎纳税人</FONT>，无边活水三门聚；

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<P mso-pagination: 17pt; 18pt; TEXT-INDENT: 0pt; 0cm WORD-BREAK: LINE-HEIGHT: break-all; widow-orphan? 12pt?><FONT face=宋体>身如<FONT color=#113dee>雪岭莲</FONT>，心比香山叶，满峡清风两袖来。
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<P LINE-HEIGHT: break-all; 12pt?><FONT face=宋体><FONT color=#ee1111>杰构涌名城，看长桥广道，巨厦高楼，端赖税收挥大笔；
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<P mso-pagination: 17pt; 18pt; TEXT-INDENT: 0pt; 0cm WORD-BREAK: 732.8pt? 687.0pt 641.2pt 595.4pt 549.6pt 503.8pt 458.0pt 412.2pt 366.4pt 320.6pt 274.8pt 229.0pt 183.2pt 137.4pt 91.6pt 45.8pt tab-stops: widow-orphan; LINE-HEIGHT: break-all; 12pt?><FONT face=宋体><FONT color=#ee1111>清风赢美誉，喜<FONT color=#000000>善政新规</FONT>，雄心壮志，全凭正气树丰碑。
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<P LINE-HEIGHT: break-all; 12pt?><FONT face=宋体>扶助以情，征收以法，情法相融，<FONT color=#f70909>聚宝盆</FONT>中金玉满；
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<P mso-pagination: 17pt; 18pt; TEXT-INDENT: 0pt; 0cm WORD-BREAK: 732.8pt? 687.0pt 641.2pt 595.4pt 549.6pt 503.8pt 458.0pt 412.2pt 366.4pt 320.6pt 274.8pt 229.0pt 183.2pt 137.4pt 91.6pt 45.8pt tab-stops: widow-orphan; LINE-HEIGHT: break-all; 12pt?><FONT face=宋体>经营凭信，缴纳凭诚，信诚并重，<FONT color=#f70909>摇钱树</FONT>上果实丰。
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<P LINE-HEIGHT: break-all; 12pt?><FONT face=宋体>风雨一肩挑，凿石引流，<FONT color=#e6421a>君为财富拓源者；
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<P mso-pagination: 17pt; 18pt; TEXT-INDENT: 0pt; 0cm WORD-BREAK: 732.8pt? 687.0pt 641.2pt 595.4pt 549.6pt 503.8pt 458.0pt 412.2pt 366.4pt 320.6pt 274.8pt 229.0pt 183.2pt 137.4pt 91.6pt 45.8pt tab-stops: widow-orphan; LINE-HEIGHT: break-all; 12pt?><FONT face=宋体>和谐千里共，遵章守法，<FONT color=#dd2222>我是光荣纳税人。
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<P LINE-HEIGHT: break-all; 12pt?><FONT face=宋体>依法征收，<FONT color=#f70909>千秋国脉千秋福；
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<P mso-pagination: 17pt; 0pt; 0cm LINE-HEIGHT: break-all; TEXT-ALIGN: left; widow-orphan? 12pt?><FONT face=宋体>照章缴纳，<FONT color=#e6421a>一份税金一份情。
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<P>还有唯一的一个虫子</P>
<P>22</P>
<P>税收兴大<FONT color=#f70909>业</FONT>，创一派人和，<FONT color=#ff0000>业</FONT>如旭日蒸蒸上；
汗水汇洪流，看三门峡壮，财似黄河滚滚来。</P>

正龙挺虎

<P>春联</P><P><a href="http://www.zh002.cn/article/200902/300.html" target="_blank" >http://www.zh002.cn/article/200902/300.html</A></P><P>全民共奏和谐曲；
<FONT color=#0000ff>举国</FONT>同歌幸福<FONT color=#0909f7>年</FONT>。</P><P>11</P><P 17pt; TEXT-INDENT: 0pt; 0cm LINE-HEIGHT: LAYOUT-GRID-MODE: char; 1.35pt; mso-char-indent-count: .13; mso-layout-grid-align: none?>交纳尽诚心，完税为荣，<FONT color=#f70909>全民共奏和谐曲</FONT>；
<P><P><P 17pt; TEXT-INDENT: 0pt; 0cm LINE-HEIGHT: LAYOUT-GRID-MODE: char; 1.35pt; mso-char-indent-count: .13; mso-layout-grid-align: none?>征收凭德政，开源聚富，<FONT color=#0909f7>九域</FONT><FONT color=#ff3300>同</FONT>浇<FONT color=#f73809>幸福</FONT><FONT color=#000000>花</FONT>。</P>

正龙挺虎

<P><FONT size=2><FONT color=#c60a00>和谐社会千秋盛</FONT></FONT></P><P><FONT size=2>国富民强万象春</FONT></P><P align=left mso-pagination: 17pt; 0pt; 0cm LINE-HEIGHT: TEXT-ALIGN: left; widow-orphan?>下面这个不能算抄袭,反而是借化得非常好~ <P align=left mso-pagination: 17pt; 0pt; 0cm LINE-HEIGHT: TEXT-ALIGN: left; widow-orphan?>36 <P><P><P 0pt; 0cm LINE-HEIGHT: 17pt?>税惠民生，百业增辉，和谐社会千秋盛； <P><P><P 0pt; 0cm LINE-HEIGHT: 17pt?>心牵国计，三门焕彩，锦绣家园万里春。</P>[em17]

庸联学会

<DIV class=quote><B>以下是引用<I>山妹</I>在2009-4-1 9:22:08的发言：</B>
<P 12pt? LINE-HEIGHT: break-all;><FONT face=宋体>总结下已发现的抄袭或套用：</FONT></P><P 12pt? LINE-HEIGHT: break-all;><FONT face=宋体>诚<FONT color=#f70909>待投资客，笑迎纳税人</FONT>，无边活水三门聚；
</FONT><p><P 12pt? LINE-HEIGHT: break-all; widow-orphan? WORD-BREAK: 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 18pt; 17pt; mso-pagination:><FONT face=宋体>身如<FONT color=#113dee>雪岭莲</FONT>，心比香山叶，满峡清风两袖来。 <p></FONT><p><P 12pt? LINE-HEIGHT: break-all;><FONT face=宋体><FONT color=#ee1111>杰构涌名城，看长桥广道，巨厦高楼，端赖税收挥大笔； <p></FONT></FONT><p><P 12pt? LINE-HEIGHT: break-all; WORD-BREAK: 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 18pt; 17pt; mso-pagination: widow-orphan; tab-stops: 45.8pt 91.6pt 137.4pt 183.2pt 229.0pt 274.8pt 320.6pt 366.4pt 412.2pt 458.0pt 503.8pt 549.6pt 595.4pt 641.2pt 687.0pt 732.8pt?><FONT face=宋体><FONT color=#ee1111>清风赢美誉，喜<FONT color=#000000>善政新规</FONT>，雄心壮志，全凭正气树丰碑。 <p></FONT></FONT><p><P 12pt? LINE-HEIGHT: break-all;><FONT face=宋体>扶助以情，征收以法，情法相融，<FONT color=#f70909>聚宝盆</FONT>中金玉满； <p></FONT><p><P 12pt? LINE-HEIGHT: break-all; WORD-BREAK: 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 18pt; 17pt; mso-pagination: widow-orphan; tab-stops: 45.8pt 91.6pt 137.4pt 183.2pt 229.0pt 274.8pt 320.6pt 366.4pt 412.2pt 458.0pt 503.8pt 549.6pt 595.4pt 641.2pt 687.0pt 732.8pt?><FONT face=宋体>经营凭信，缴纳凭诚，信诚并重，<FONT color=#f70909>摇钱树</FONT>上果实丰。 <p></FONT><p><P 12pt? LINE-HEIGHT: break-all;><FONT face=宋体>风雨一肩挑，凿石引流，<FONT color=#e6421a>君为财富拓源者； <p></FONT></FONT><p><P 12pt? LINE-HEIGHT: break-all; WORD-BREAK: 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 18pt; 17pt; mso-pagination: widow-orphan; tab-stops: 45.8pt 91.6pt 137.4pt 183.2pt 229.0pt 274.8pt 320.6pt 366.4pt 412.2pt 458.0pt 503.8pt 549.6pt 595.4pt 641.2pt 687.0pt 732.8pt?><FONT face=宋体>和谐千里共，遵章守法，<FONT color=#dd2222>我是光荣纳税人。 <p></FONT></FONT><p><P 12pt? LINE-HEIGHT: break-all;><FONT face=宋体>依法征收，<FONT color=#f70909>千秋国脉千秋福； <p></FONT></FONT><p><P 12pt? LINE-HEIGHT: break-all; widow-orphan? 0cm 0pt; 17pt; mso-pagination: left; TEXT-ALIGN:><FONT face=宋体>照章缴纳，<FONT color=#e6421a>一份税金一份情。 <p></FONT></FONT><p><P 0cm 0pt?><P><FONT face="Times New Roman"></FONT></P><p></DIV><P><P>关于抄袭和化用的界定，说难不难，说易也不易。</P><P 12pt? LINE-HEIGHT: break-all;><FONT face=宋体><FONT color=#ee1111>杰构涌名城，看长桥广道，巨厦高楼，端赖税收挥大笔； <p></FONT></FONT><p><P 12pt? LINE-HEIGHT: break-all; WORD-BREAK: 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 18pt; 17pt; mso-pagination: widow-orphan; tab-stops: 45.8pt 91.6pt 137.4pt 183.2pt 229.0pt 274.8pt 320.6pt 366.4pt 412.2pt 458.0pt 503.8pt 549.6pt 595.4pt 641.2pt 687.0pt 732.8pt?><FONT face=宋体><FONT color=#ee1111>清风赢美誉，喜<FONT color=#000000>善政新规</FONT>，雄心壮志，全凭正气树丰碑。 <p></FONT></FONT><P>这联基本上是从头到尾基本不改字，完全可以界定为抄袭。</P><P 12pt? LINE-HEIGHT: break-all;><FONT face=宋体></FONT> <P 12pt? LINE-HEIGHT: break-all;><FONT face=宋体>依法征收，<FONT color=#f70909>千秋国脉千秋福； <p></FONT></FONT><p><P 12pt? LINE-HEIGHT: break-all; widow-orphan? 0cm 0pt; 17pt; mso-pagination: left; TEXT-ALIGN:><FONT face=宋体>照章缴纳，<FONT color=#e6421a>一份税金一份情。 </FONT></FONT><P 12pt? LINE-HEIGHT: break-all; widow-orphan? 0cm 0pt; 17pt; mso-pagination: left; TEXT-ALIGN:><FONT face=宋体><FONT color=#e6421a><FONT color=#000000>这个是原“孔府杯”税收与小康征联大赛的三等奖作品，作者<FONT face=Arial size=1>萧树思，曾被林声耀先生发现他在南海西樵山的一副获奖联涉嫌抄袭前人的作品。</FONT></FONT><p></FONT></FONT><P 12pt? LINE-HEIGHT: break-all;><FONT face=宋体>风雨一肩挑，凿石引流，<FONT color=#e6421a>君为财富拓源者； <p></FONT></FONT><p><P 12pt? LINE-HEIGHT: break-all; WORD-BREAK: 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 18pt; 17pt; mso-pagination: widow-orphan; tab-stops: 45.8pt 91.6pt 137.4pt 183.2pt 229.0pt 274.8pt 320.6pt 366.4pt 412.2pt 458.0pt 503.8pt 549.6pt 595.4pt 641.2pt 68

正龙挺虎

<P LINE-HEIGHT: break-all; 12pt?><FONT face=宋体><FONT color=#000000><FONT color=#dd2222> </FONT><P LINE-HEIGHT: break-all; 12pt?><FONT face=宋体><FONT color=#000000>诚<FONT color=#ff3300>待投资客，笑迎纳税人</FONT>，无边活水三门聚； </FONT><P><FONT color=#000000></FONT></P></FONT><P><FONT color=#000000></FONT></P><P mso-pagination: 17pt; 18pt; TEXT-INDENT: 0pt; 0cm WORD-BREAK: LINE-HEIGHT: break-all; widow-orphan? 12pt?><FONT face=宋体><FONT color=#000000>身如雪岭莲，心比香山叶，满峡清风两袖来。</FONT></FONT></P></FONT></FONT><P LINE-HEIGHT: break-all; 12pt?><FONT face=宋体><FONT color=#000000>扶助以情，征收以法，情法相融，<FONT color=#ff0000>聚宝盆</FONT>中金玉满； </FONT><P><FONT color=#000000></FONT></P></FONT><P><FONT color=#000000></FONT></P><P mso-pagination: 17pt; 18pt; TEXT-INDENT: 0pt; 0cm WORD-BREAK: 732.8pt? 687.0pt 641.2pt 595.4pt 549.6pt 503.8pt 458.0pt 412.2pt 366.4pt 320.6pt 274.8pt 229.0pt 183.2pt 137.4pt 91.6pt 45.8pt tab-stops: widow-orphan; LINE-HEIGHT: break-all; 12pt?><FONT face=宋体 color=#000000>经营凭信，缴纳凭诚，信诚并重，<FONT color=#ff0000>摇钱树</FONT>上果实丰。</FONT></P><P mso-pagination: 17pt; 18pt; TEXT-INDENT: 0pt; 0cm WORD-BREAK: 732.8pt? 687.0pt 641.2pt 595.4pt 549.6pt 503.8pt 458.0pt 412.2pt 366.4pt 320.6pt 274.8pt 229.0pt 183.2pt 137.4pt 91.6pt 45.8pt tab-stops: widow-orphan; LINE-HEIGHT: break-all; 12pt?>同意。此2联句确实有点小问题，但不应该算抄袭</P>

庸联学会

<DIV class=quote><B>以下是引用<I>赣鄱哪吒</I>在2009-3-31 10:00:54的发言：</B>


石先生所言正是。当时在创作时也考虑到了中外之衡的问题，也查过天平的定义，发现眼花缭乱，广义之分，狭义之分俱有。西人有天“秤”座之说（此为“星”座），天平上面本身就是有刻度的，姑且当成“星”吧。考虑到天平是一种公平的概念，而且“<FONT face=宋体>秤星”的轻小与“崤山”所引申的责任的重大的对比，就将其融合一起。而以杆秤之秤星定义之，当然也就毕竟不够严谨。别外鉴重是分开使用的，鉴字主要是为对比作联接。前面说了此联是在冒险而为，所以必须接受任何结果了。一并谢谢长安行吟联友的关注。</FONT>
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<P>不好意思，我并非石先生，跟石先生提鞋都不配。
<P>兄台的联，立意奇倔，又能转危为安，甚好。文似看山不喜平，意料之外，情理之中，当如此。</P>