【2009.4.5止】“和谐税务杯”初评结果公示

單于

<DIV class=quote><B>以下是引用<I>正龙挺虎</I>在2009-3-30 12:31:23的发言：</B>

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<P align=left LINE-HEIGHT: 17pt; mso-pagination: 0pt; 0cm left; TEXT-ALIGN: widow-orphan?>税字千钧。</P>
<P align=left LINE-HEIGHT: 17pt; mso-pagination: 0pt; 0cm left; TEXT-ALIGN: widow-orphan?>字虽少,但对而有联,尤其是下句的“字”字，呼应上句的“万卷”，有一种沉甸甸的重任之感，使命之感。</P>
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<P>欢迎各位老师砸砖捧场~~</P>[em01][em01]
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【2009.4.5止】“和谐税务杯”初评结果公示

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<P>高智商！好作品！佩服。
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山妹

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<P><FONT color=#f70909>征纳同拧一股绳。 </FONT>
<P><FONT color=#1a1ae6>这是本次进入等级奖的三个短联，短联能进入大赛等级奖实属不易，值得庆贺，但细细看来这三个短联，除第三个真正让人眼前一亮外，前边两个有待商榷。
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<P 18pt; TEXT-INDENT: 17pt; LINE-HEIGHT: mso-pagination: 0pt; 0cm break-all; WORD-BREAK: 732.8pt? 687.0pt 641.2pt 595.4pt 549.6pt 503.8pt 458.0pt 412.2pt 366.4pt 320.6pt 274.8pt 229.0pt 183.2pt 137.4pt 91.6pt 45.8pt tab-stops: widow-orphan;><FONT color=#f70909>两税撑天。</FONT></P>
<P 18pt; TEXT-INDENT: 17pt; LINE-HEIGHT: mso-pagination: 0pt; 0cm break-all; WORD-BREAK: 732.8pt? 687.0pt 641.2pt 595.4pt 549.6pt 503.8pt 458.0pt 412.2pt 366.4pt 320.6pt 274.8pt 229.0pt 183.2pt 137.4pt 91.6pt 45.8pt tab-stops: widow-orphan;><FONT color=#1a42e6>这一联若没有下联，“九州铺锦”用在任何春联里都可以，应该说上下联脱节。因此短联更要紧扣主题，应没有一个费字，建议考虑退出等级。</FONT></P></FONT><FONT color=#1a42e6>
<P 18pt; TEXT-INDENT: 17pt; LINE-HEIGHT: mso-pagination: 0pt; 0cm break-all; WORD-BREAK: 732.8pt? 687.0pt 641.2pt 595.4pt 549.6pt 503.8pt 458.0pt 412.2pt 366.4pt 320.6pt 274.8pt 229.0pt 183.2pt 137.4pt 91.6pt 45.8pt tab-stops: widow-orphan;><FONT color=#f70909>心系强国志； </FONT>
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<P 18pt; TEXT-INDENT: 17pt; LINE-HEIGHT: mso-pagination: 0pt; 0cm break-all; WORD-BREAK: 732.8pt? 687.0pt 641.2pt 595.4pt 549.6pt 503.8pt 458.0pt 412.2pt 366.4pt 320.6pt 274.8pt 229.0pt 183.2pt 137.4pt 91.6pt 45.8pt tab-stops: widow-orphan;><FONT color=#1111ee>这一联过于简单，尤其“系”字欠推敲。其句式落于俗套。建议退出等级奖。</P>
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正龙挺虎

<DIV class=quote><B>以下是引用<I>單于</I>在2009-3-30 13:15:36的发言：</B>




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<P>高智商！好作品！佩服。
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十二万分感谢單于老师对学生的谬赞~~[em04]

邢伟川

<P><FONT size=3>三门峡的赛事我也做过评委，做评委很不容易，但作者也不容易，互相理解吧，我也晒晒自己用心写的五副联。第四联侥幸进入优秀。</FONT></P><P>1</P><P>两税蕴生机，机赖风和，和促繁荣春拔笋；</P><P>三门来活水，水输峡满，满斟幸福我擎觞。</P><P>2</P><P>两税蕴生机，机赖风和，和促千行春拔笋；</P><P>三门施惠政，政如日暖，暖苏九野鸟鸣琴。</P><P>3</P><P>税畅和风，政畅廉风，乘风拔地举风鹏，三门崛起；</P><P>市腾俊彩，峡腾瑞彩，舞彩织春铺彩锦，百业繁荣。</P><P>4</P><P>和谐两税进行时，征管奉公，勤廉律己，头上国徽心上镜；</P><P>崛起三门瞻仰处，帮扶举凤，诚信引龙，票中数字梦中诗。</P><P>5</P><P>税活千行，恰与长河律动，一怀沧海勤酬也；</P><P>法依三尺，何堪廉石尘封，两袖清风好释然。</P>

高处不胜寒

<P>“税务”联是年年征集，我是年年写，终究是写不出名堂来。这次“和谐税务”就只随便的应付了一下，所谓“急忙那得有诗来”。拙作如下：</P><P>鸟唱和谐，细雨三门时雨沛；</P><P>人谋幸福，繁花万朵税花红。</P>

庸联学会

<DIV class=quote><B>以下是引用<I>冷不防</I>在2009-3-30 11:08:07的发言：</B>


<P>看成自对更不行，私、偏皆平，能平对平吗？</P></DIV>
<P>自对有很多种表现形式，分句的排比对是其中之一。一家之言，仅供参考。</P>

庸联学会

<DIV class=quote><B>以下是引用<I>学堂窝人</I>在2009-3-30 12:23:51的发言：</B>

<P>晒晒额的落选联：</P>
<P LINE-HEIGHT: break-all; 12pt?><FONT face=宋体 size=3>逢善无欺，逢欺无善，但附民心无附势；
</FONT><FONT face=宋体 size=3>该征不免，该免不征，唯凭国法不凭情。
</FONT><FONT face=宋体 size=3>（逢欺无善：指对偷税漏税者毫不心慈手软，坚决予以严厉打击。）</FONT></P>
<P LINE-HEIGHT: break-all; 12pt?><FONT face=宋体 size=3>怀公正心，收公平税，四海高堆金字塔；
</FONT><FONT face=宋体 size=3>捧人民爱，弹人文曲，三门同唱大风歌。</FONT></P>
<P LINE-HEIGHT: break-all; 12pt?><FONT face=宋体 size=3>法系人心，政系人权，政善人和财路广；
</FONT><FONT size=3><FONT face=宋体>税为国脉，民为国本，民强国富景观新。</P></FONT></FONT>
<P>[em01][em01][em01]
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第一联构思别开生面，句中自对也天成，落选确实很遗憾，可能是“逢欺无善”这一句不大好理解吧，生造且还须作郑笺的，一般难以接受。

正龙挺虎

<DIV class=quote><B>以下是引用<I>山妹</I>在2009-3-30 13:24:46的发言：</B>

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<P 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: mso-pagination: 17pt; LINE-HEIGHT: 18pt; break-all; WORD-BREAK: 732.8pt? 687.0pt 641.2pt 595.4pt 549.6pt 503.8pt 458.0pt 412.2pt 366.4pt 320.6pt 274.8pt 229.0pt 183.2pt 137.4pt 91.6pt 45.8pt tab-stops: widow-orphan;><FONT color=#f70909>心系强国志； </FONT>
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<P><FONT color=#f70909>征纳同拧一股绳。 </FONT>
<P><FONT color=#1a1ae6>这是本次进入等级奖的三个短联，短联能进入大赛等级奖实属不易，赢值得庆贺，但细细看来这三个短联，除第三个真正让人眼前一亮外，前边两个有待商榷。
<P 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: mso-pagination: 17pt; LINE-HEIGHT: 18pt; break-all; WORD-BREAK: 732.8pt? 687.0pt 641.2pt 595.4pt 549.6pt 503.8pt 458.0pt 412.2pt 366.4pt 320.6pt 274.8pt 229.0pt 183.2pt 137.4pt 91.6pt 45.8pt tab-stops: widow-orphan;><FONT color=#ff0000>九州铺锦；
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<P 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: mso-pagination: 17pt; LINE-HEIGHT: 18pt; break-all; WORD-BREAK: 732.8pt? 687.0pt 641.2pt 595.4pt 549.6pt 503.8pt 458.0pt 412.2pt 366.4pt 320.6pt 274.8pt 229.0pt 183.2pt 137.4pt 91.6pt 45.8pt tab-stops: widow-orphan;><FONT color=#1a42e6>这一联若没有下联，“九州铺锦”用在任何春联里都可以，所以短联更要紧扣主题，应没有一个费字，应该考虑退出等级。</FONT></P></FONT><FONT color=#1a42e6>
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庸联学会

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孟广祥

<P>我过去从未把落选联示众，这次也拿来晒晒，算是参与交流：</P><P>税分国地，额异寡多，法制立权威，奉臬惟期新世盛；</P><P>事涉家邦，情同忧乐，人民求福祉，捧心先祷巨龙强。</P>

正龙挺虎

<DIV class=quote><B>以下是引用<I>孟广祥</I>在2009-3-30 14:26:18的发言：</B>

<P>我过去从未把落选联示众，这次也拿来晒晒，算是参与交流：</P>
<P>税分国地，额异寡多，法制立权威，奉臬惟期新世盛；</P>
<P>事涉家邦，情同忧乐，人民求福祉，捧心先祷巨龙强。</P></DIV>
<P>税分国地，<FONT color=#ee3d11>额</FONT>异寡多，法制立权威，奉臬惟期新世盛；</P>
<P>事涉家邦，情同忧乐，人民求福祉，捧心先祷巨龙强。</P>

<P>和和~~孟老师把额也用上了</P>[em23][em23]

孟广祥

<DIV class=quote><B>以下是引用<I>正龙挺虎</I>在2009-3-30 14:31:22的发言：</B>


<P>税分国地，<FONT color=#ee3d11>额</FONT>异寡多，法制立权威，奉臬惟期新世盛；</P>
<P>事涉家邦，情同忧乐，人民求福祉，捧心先祷巨龙强。</P>
<P>和和~~孟老师把额也用上了</P>[em23][em23]</DIV>

谢李老师关注,此"额"指数额.

冷不防

<P><FONT size=5>短联得奖不容易！</FONT></P><P><FONT size=5>为几副短联入选等级奖叫好！</FONT></P><P><FONT size=5>给各位评委鼓掌！</FONT></P>

正龙挺虎

<DIV class=quote><B>以下是引用<I>孟广祥</I>在2009-3-30 14:40:58的发言：</B>


谢李老师关注,此"额"指数额.</DIV>

[em04]

正龙挺虎

<P>深拓税源，固本强基，融绿叶对根<FONT color=#f73809>的</FONT>情意；
倍添国力，团花簇锦，续春风和雨<FONT color=#ee1111>的</FONT>诗篇。</P><P>税收兴大<FONT color=#f70909>业</FONT>，创一派人和，<FONT color=#ff0000>业</FONT>如旭日蒸蒸上；
汗水汇洪流，看三门峡壮，财似黄河滚滚来。</P><P>与老师门请教一下，之字等虚词可以这样对，的字是助词这样对行不？</P><P>举贤不避亲，捉虫争优秀</P>[em01][em01]

流泉

<DIV class=quote><B>以下是引用<I>大河风</I>在2009-3-29 23:51:36的发言：</B>

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山妹

<b>安徽蒙城“地税杯”征联揭晓榜
</b><P><P>　　 <B>特等奖（1名）</B><P>　　地利人和，帮民种下<FONT color=#f73809>摇钱树</FONT>；
　　税丰财旺，为国捧来<FONT color=#f70909>聚宝盆</FONT>。
　　江西　潘一之</P><P 18pt; TEXT-INDENT: 17pt; LINE-HEIGHT: mso-pagination: 0pt; 0cm break-all; WORD-BREAK: 732.8pt? 687.0pt 641.2pt 595.4pt 549.6pt 503.8pt 458.0pt 412.2pt 366.4pt 320.6pt 274.8pt 229.0pt 183.2pt 137.4pt 91.6pt 45.8pt tab-stops: widow-orphan;>扶助以情，征收以法，情法相融，<FONT color=#ee3d11>聚宝盆</FONT>中金玉满；
<P><P><P 18pt; TEXT-INDENT: 17pt; LINE-HEIGHT: mso-pagination: 0pt; 0cm break-all; WORD-BREAK: 732.8pt? 687.0pt 641.2pt 595.4pt 549.6pt 503.8pt 458.0pt 412.2pt 366.4pt 320.6pt 274.8pt 229.0pt 183.2pt 137.4pt 91.6pt 45.8pt tab-stops: widow-orphan;>经营凭信，缴纳凭诚，信诚并重，<FONT color=#f70909>摇钱树</FONT>上果实丰。
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流泉

<DIV class=quote><B>以下是引用<I>正龙挺虎</I>在2009-3-30 12:31:23的发言：</B>

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<P align=left widow-orphan? TEXT-ALIGN: left; 0cm 0pt; mso-pagination: LINE-HEIGHT: 17pt;>民生万卷；</P>
<P align=left widow-orphan? TEXT-ALIGN: left; 0cm 0pt; mso-pagination: LINE-HEIGHT: 17pt;> <FONT color=#ff0033>好像句子不完整，卷后有话未说。
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<P align=left widow-orphan? TEXT-ALIGN: left; 0cm 0pt; mso-pagination: LINE-HEIGHT: 17pt;>字虽少,但对而有联,尤其是下句的“字”字，呼应上句的“万卷”，有一种沉甸甸的重任之感，使命之感。</P>
<P>[em04][em04]</P>
<P>欢迎各位老师砸砖捧场~~</P>[em01][em01]
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<P>为勇气叫好。</P>

流泉

<DIV class=quote><B>以下是引用<I>山妹</I>在2009-3-30 15:46:37的发言：</B>
<B>安徽蒙城“地税杯”征联揭晓榜
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<P>　　 <B>特等奖（1名）</B>
<P>　　地利人和，帮民种下<FONT color=#f73809>摇钱树</FONT>；
　　税丰财旺，为国捧来<FONT color=#f70909>聚宝盆</FONT>。
　　江西　潘一之</P>
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<P>这个没问题！
<P>山妹真用心、真敢发表个人观点。要是当了评委，不敢再假设。。。。</P>
<P>有些是萝卜白菜的问题。</P>[em05]

正龙挺虎

<P>额先表明态度：大部分之处是学习，小部分之处属疑问</P><P>1
征无私，管无偏，每仗冰心邀朗月；
苦不悔，劳不怨，常倾大爱布春风。 </P><P>三平对三仄总归是不太妥当。朗字稍微凑了些。</P><P>2
联写三门，收纳双楹皆妙对；
税关百姓，和谐二字是横批。 </P><P>楹，肯定是楹柱的意思，有机巧在里面，三门，肯定不能当成三门峡，应该是三处门，人门，鬼门，神门，上句很妙。下句整体不太协调，是有凑的嫌疑，通常是应该下句气势要盖过上句，但上句真的太妙了，下句就成蛇尾了</P><P>3
留春于境，造福于民，税苑荡和风，并蒂连枝花两朵；
聚宝之门，生金之地，财源来活水，流馨溢彩浪千重。 </P><P>并蒂连枝花，虽罗嗦，但合理。流馨溢彩浪，似乎不妥当，明面意思色香具全形容浪？当然喻面是说道德声誉。但总归是不太理想。</P><P>4
诚待投资客，笑迎纳税人，无边活水三门聚；
身如雪岭莲，心比香山叶，满峡清风两袖来。 </P><P>雪岭：一般是指四川岷山。
香山：有三处。(1)在今河南省洛阳市龙门山之东。唐白居易曾在此筑石楼，自号香山居士。(2)在江苏省吴县西南。相传吴王种香处。下有采香径。(3)北京市西郊西山山岭之一。
前2句自对，后1句似乎是说清正廉洁，嵌字三门峡。
。。。。。</P><P>看看动静再打枪~~</P>[em15][em15]