两副春联试译

黄中习 · 发表于 2005-4-19 16:30

1) “天增岁月人增寿, 春满乾坤福满门”（横批：吉祥如意）；
2)“风和日丽春光好，万紫千红江山娇”（横批：大地回春）]
我们可以这样翻译：
1) Heaven attains greater age and people live to longer years;
Spring fills the earth and every hearth procures more happiness.
（Good Fortune As One Wishes）
2) The warm sun and the gentle breeze make the spring wonderful.
All the brilliant flowers make the landscape most beautiful.
（Spring Has Come Round）
 前一联上下联各10个英语单词，15个音节，句尾用韵。后一联上下联各14个音节（下联11个单词，下联9个单词），句尾用韵。
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阳光在线 · 发表于 2005-4-19 17:06

呵呵~~很有意思，也凑着翻译一下（横批不动了：）：1) “天增岁月人增寿, 春满乾坤福满门”（横批：吉祥如意）；1) People were living as longer as celestial being in years,
 Spring comes and everybody will be more blessedness.（Good Fortune As One Wishes）

黄中习 · 发表于 2005-4-19 18:04

斑竹英语水平不错，可略加修改如下，您看如何？People were living as longer as celestial being in years,
 Spring comes and everybody enjoys more blessedness.（Good Fortune As One Wishes）

黄中习 · 发表于 2005-4-19 18:06

时态还得修以下：People are living as longer as celestial being in years,
Spring comes and everybody enjoys more blessedness.（Good Fortune As One Wishes）

黄中习 · 发表于 2005-4-19 18:07

单复数还得修以下：People are living as long as celestial being in years,
Spring comes and everybody enjoys more blessedness.（Good Fortune As One Wishes）

阳光在线 · 发表于 2005-4-19 22:46

呵呵~~我临时凑热闹罢了，翻译这个活，游子比较在行~

黄中习 · 发表于 2005-4-25 11:15

斑竹的翻译略加修正便是佳译，真的。

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南山主人 · 发表于 2005-4-29 03:12

At the new point as time grows it increases human longevities.
At every place where spring comes it brings new luck to all families.
如今看来春满乾坤只是虚指,或古人误解.

黄中习 · 发表于 2005-4-29 15:59

贵宾的第二句是好译文！

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两副春联试译

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